[sv-ac] Review of Latest 1550 proposal

From: Thomas Thatcher <Thomas.Thatcher_at_.....>
Date: Tue Sep 04 2007 - 13:22:52 PDT
Hello Everyone,

I have reviewed the latest proposal for 1550  (file Sampled1550_070904_dk.doc).

I have only one comment.  On page 322, in the second new paragraph, the text
was changed as follows:

From:

    The value of an expression sampled in the preponed region corresponding to
    time 0 is the result of evaluating the expression using the initial values
    of the variables comprising the expression.

To:
    The value of an expression sampled in the Preponed region corresponding
    to time 0 is the result of evaluating the expression using the initial
    sampled values of the variables – the initial values of the variables
    comprising the expression.

(With "initial sampled values" in italics)

I think I liked the original wording better.  In the new proposal, it appears
that a new term "initial sampled values" is being defined, but it is never
used anywhere else in the text, so why define it?  Is "initial sampled value"
different in some way from the "initial value"?  I think adding the cross
references later in this paragraph was sufficient.

Tom
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