RE: [sv-ac] Review of Latest 1550 proposal

Hi all,

Following Tom's comments I am depositing the original Ed's version.
Though the same reference there is repeated three times in different
fragments, the fragments are not continuous. Better suggestions are
welcome.

Thanks,
Dmitry

-----Original Message-----
From: owner-sv-ac@server.eda.org [mailto:owner-sv-ac@server.eda.org] On
Behalf Of Thomas Thatcher
Sent: Tuesday, September 04, 2007 11:23 PM
To: sv-ac@server.eda-stds.org
Subject: [sv-ac] Review of Latest 1550 proposal

Hello Everyone,

I have reviewed the latest proposal for 1550  (file
Sampled1550_070904_dk.doc).

I have only one comment.  On page 322, in the second new paragraph, the
text
was changed as follows:

From:

    The value of an expression sampled in the preponed region
corresponding to
    time 0 is the result of evaluating the expression using the initial
values
    of the variables comprising the expression.

To:
    The value of an expression sampled in the Preponed region
corresponding
    to time 0 is the result of evaluating the expression using the
initial
    sampled values of the variables - the initial values of the
variables
    comprising the expression.

(With "initial sampled values" in italics)

I think I liked the original wording better.  In the new proposal, it
appears
that a new term "initial sampled values" is being defined, but it is
never
used anywhere else in the text, so why define it?  Is "initial sampled
value"
different in some way from the "initial value"?  I think adding the
cross
references later in this paragraph was sufficient.

Tom
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Sun Microsystems
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