RE: [sv-ac] Call to vote: Due November 1

Hi Thomas,

John's friendly amndments have been incorporated (see updated proposal in http://www.eda-twiki.org/mantis/view.php?id=3135).

Best,
Dana

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From: owner-sv-ac@eda.org [owner-sv-ac@eda.org] On Behalf Of Havlicek John-R8AAAU [r8aaau@freescale.com]
Sent: Monday, November 01, 2010 2:56 PM
To: thomas.thatcher@oracle.com; sv-ac@eda.org
Subject: RE: [sv-ac] Call to vote: Due November 1

Hi Thomas:

My votes and comments are below.

J.H.

Mantis 2904 _X__ Yes ____ No

Mantis 3135 _X__ Yes ____ No

Friendly Amendments:
- Change "on a time step" to "in a time step" in multiple places.
- Remove comma after "say" in "it is more precise to say, that" in
several places.
- Add a comma after "step" in "including the current time step" in
several places.
- Add a comma before "where" in "where counting starts at".
- Avoid "note" because of IEEE rules on notes. Change "Note thus that"
to "In particular".

Mantis 2412 _X__ Yes ____ No

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