Re: [sv-ac] uploaded updated proposal for 1361

Hi Manisha:

I noticed three minor things, listed below, that I would like tidied 
up before we call for the vote and pass this over to SV-CC.

J.H.

- In several places, there are references to "22.19" that I think should be "22.9".

- In several places, there is text

     Refer to section 17.11.2 and 17.13 for the definition of vacuous success.

  In view of the changes from 1381 already in P1800-2008-draft1, I think this 
  should be

     Refer to section 17.13.6 for the definition of vacuous success.

- I think the English structure of the sentence

     On disable, enable, reset, and kill, pass action, fail action and
     vacuous action callbacks, the returned p_vpi_attempt_info info
     pointer is NULL, and no attempt information is available.

   at the end is confusing (too poetic?).  Should there be an "and" before "kill"?


> 
> Hi,
> =20
> I have uploaded an updated version on mantis. This proposal is now ready
> for vote.
> =20
> Thanks.
> Manisha
> 

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