Hi,
I have uploaded a new proposal with the following changes.
1. In 20.11, formatted list of arguments as list.
2. Changed the sentence "The $assertcontrol has different arguments as follows".
3. Added ',' before i.e. or e.g.
4. changed '==' to 'is equivalent to'
5. Added description of different arguments to each bullet for the argument and removed their description from the paragraph at the end.
6. Changed S_IMMEDIATE to SIMPLE_IMMEDIATE. Changed D_IMMEDIATE to DEFERRED_IMMEDIATE.
7. Changed 'system task $assertcontrol' to '$assertcontrol system task'.
8. Fixed the on/off/kill numbers from 2,3,4 to 3,4,5 in writing equivalents.
9. Fixed language at some other places based on Scott's comments.
Please review and let me know if any change is required.
Thanks.
Manisha
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